May 10, 2013
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Drafty
xanga balked at me posting this for a bit so.. here’s it now with even more. this is seriousness….as in a draft
Zeb’s 5.9 AMC envelop to boblo coaster, then minor position edit….now notepad home
Dreams Royal Blue…. or at least the beginning.
“Zoo soot Wyatt,” Lil’ Pita warbles,
“toe black a hot ‘ole beer,” WHAT? WHERE?
Swing’s Back, Baby, and that’s fact
So sings Frita from her car chairFrita, Five, collects nicknames like black finds lint
Pita Pocket, FREE ME (preemie) Piece of piece of *Pizza! Pizza!
Nineteen Hundred Ninety-Seven; Kindergarten
Momma bites her lip; it’s time to swing East.“Pita Pita,” Momma looks into the rearview
“It’s FREE TA! Mommy!” says a big pout
(The R’s come softly it’s more like “Flea Pa!”)
“How…was school, Frita?” Momma switches subjects“be seen ocean oil blue” Momma ‘s only get so much
“You saw the ocean Royal Blue?” guesses Momma
“Yessss and burdee poo-pooed on Howie” giggles Girly
Crap. The kid’s having fun and we gotta go.The light turns red. The way north means turn Left; South
There’s hours before the other two are due
Left it is corkscrewing towards the way Washington
Up giddy-up to touch the white skyhttp://www.timelessimagesmi.com/boblo.html
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google maps
http://www.portlandbridges.com/photoimagefiles/astoriabridge-35mm0film00029-s.jpg
Shoot, should have adjusted color to royal blue not azure
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“Mommy, when’s Daddy coming home?”
This is some coaster! pitted stomac before the top!
“Daddy’s On Set; He’ll be home soon, Sweety.”
The hell he will, the hearing’s not ’til Monday.Down Momma and Frita go as a ship slips out to sea
At bridge’s end it Chips, water, gas and time to pee
And that picture perfect smile; the last for awhile
Lazy ocean bird serenades and that awful feeling, Free.A different girly giggle is in the breeze
Daddy had a different movie in mind
some assistant flubbed the lines and got slapped
and a weekend at the city’s pleasure to be at easecolors invert so do shades
roads like swords go both ways
along the brick road yellow in hue
folded ankle turning dreams royal blue.
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II.Here it is butt crack of dawn
it oscilates damn her and uh oh
untrust worthy? HAHA MON DAY.
the parents sung that – I, Howard?I, Howard… i, ho ward…. howard.
Damn Cock-tease. and now what
this better blow over…it wont
FUCK. I just now the “sorry” comin’…
Case dismissed. what about my weekend?
Case dismissed. What about my JOB?
case dismissed. She’s not gonna buy it
Case dismissed. yep. knew it. Cashiered.Indians had totem poles, power.
I get statues and plague…PLACKS
Tourist trap ripoff symbolism
beurocratic bird shit bill, (Ticket.)case dismissed means she LIED
don’t believe you, don’t bother
case dismissed means what gives?
who you foolin? I gotta go.
…Cryin’ Monday to fab Thursday!
the joint pays per job wait 3 days
cash money. cute counter chick
hey Shai-sparkles! I had her.Yo English garden creatures, Neil DIAMOND
right NOW, easy, ditch the bitch
Case Dismissed and I lost?
good riddance; please fuck right offIII.
ACKKKKKKK! a BIRD thunk. windsheild.
screech go tires. honk go horns.
Mommy!you killed the the BIRDY
It’s okay sweety, It’s okay sweety.cheatin’ stoned drunk broke husband
Every call creditors bills PAY NOW
house wont sell, I need; dying children…. DAMN BIRD
Thanks GIVING gobble gobble and GET Mer-ryt’was just a dream, t’was just a dream
RINGGGGGGGG.Honey, your dad’s going….
rinnnng let discuss their offer…CLACK!!!
to hell with. this. place.
…it’s a tragic lie, flickers… good wine.
four days and… please DONT SNOW!
that kid STARES….? peace and QUIET
they’ve ALL a wake up comin’…
limpin in that, god damned wind
what are we go ing to do
he drove away. that asshole
It’s NOT MY FAULT WHAT? A bill?ACT of GOD, that’s BULL SHIT
he drove away – I lost everything?
well a few pictures, check’s in the mail.
eighty-four hundred DAMN Dollars.THank you Seagull Iowa
act of god my black ass.
check say PAID… I didn’t? SIGN???
bye bye everything byeWelcome to Detroit Michigan
Popcorn gunfire, not corn
Bullshit Bills, more snow coming
all three have the damn pinkeye.Therrrrrre’s no place like home
Therrrrrre’s no place like home
Therrrrrre’s no place like home
at least the pumps are red.
Comments (8)
This was a good, fun read! I liked the line “here it is, butt crack of dawn”! Brilliant!
HUGS and Happy Friday!!!
@adamswomanback - I’ve a picture to get after and a character point and character’s shift or this is about 1/3 of all i was looking up.
and lol if you have the patience and memory you’ll see something of my writing process which means as this is “drafty” as in a FIRST” draft… II’ll end up tossing most of this wholesale.. not perhaps the driving theme.. just the presentation. heh, crude humor anwe I like but there’s a better way to say this and with an economy of foul language. and You’re about to find out how many stereotypes I sadly know 
there’s a cheeseburger coming my way *big smile_ kind of hugs back
I feel like I’ve witnessed a three part play! Bravo. I see what you mean about capturing an emotion or feel.
@distractedbyzombies -
aw bear, perhaps if I can plague you with the.. oh already did LOL you have said you survived my avalance 
. Yeah I feel like sharing what i get when I’m just patience enough to attempt a bigger scope than a haiku.
@starmanjones - well, I haven’t made it all the way out, but I found an air pocket and am holding steady.
actually, I have tomorrow morning slated for not being an ungrateful little sh–, high hopes for catching up with all friends, messages, and comments. 
@distractedbyzombies -
i’ pleased as punch i get comments at all 
thank you.
@starmanjones - to be clear, I made it through this just fine. not sure I am going to make it through much more of the evening in a conscious state.
@distractedbyzombies -
