You’ve raised the coffee bar. I. Re. Fuse. To. Do. Ses. Tea. Nahs.
Stalled Sestinas! For the finish.
@sleekpeek - lol! I’ve never til this one gotten one recommended- my favorite of course was the boozy recipe for raspeberry coca cola scones. but the point here is to remind you of a play of sounds cess as in cesspool not ses tea- nice we’ll go with that. na? nana na na nana na na hey hey hey good bye.? lol hopefully you gimme a whisper of credit before ralphin in the toilet about the form… i tried for a proper theme through it and thus succeeding in completing the torture ya y me! weeee. cess PEE? nahna na na hey hey hey, I’m outta this comment …buh bye.
Dang now after reading this I have a strong craving for Starbucks.
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Stalled, but I like what you have so far!
@songoftheheart -
raises cup to a cheers! you probably should be careful of refills
wow, I’m amazed by that coffee. My coffee is just black.
@godfatherofgreenbay - :) now I have to edit the boo boos
but thanks man
You’ve raised the coffee bar. I. Re. Fuse. To. Do. Ses. Tea. Nahs.
Stalled Sestinas! For the finish.
@sleekpeek - lol! I’ve never til this one gotten one recommended- my favorite of course was the boozy recipe for raspeberry coca cola scones. but the point here is to remind you of a play of sounds
ya y me! weeee.
cess as in cesspool
not ses
tea- nice we’ll go with that.
na? nana na na nana na na hey hey hey good bye.?
lol hopefully you gimme a whisper of credit before ralphin in the toilet about the form… i tried for a proper theme through it and thus succeeding in completing the torture
cess PEE? nahna na na hey hey hey, I’m outta this comment …buh bye.
Dang now after reading this I have a strong craving for Starbucks.
@Grannys_Place - woo hoo!
Ye gods that’s a lot
of math to write poetry.
Inconceivable.
Do you realize
these replies demand of me
more effort than posts?
And thus are my posts
the sad, ignored, sorry lot
not reflecting me.
Where as poetry
reflects me, I realize,
Inconceivable!
Inconceivable,
a cartoonist’s response-posts
ask, you realize
the accursed lot
as responsive poetry.
More me-like than me.
Bloody stupid me,
stuck with “Inconceivable”
laden poetry.
Why sestina posts?
The whole “by the numbers” lot?
Do you realize…?
Do you realize,
Sestina, haiku and me
the coffee crazed lot
“Inconceivable”
once more, appears in my posts,
as does “poetry”…
conscious poetry,
that can, itself realize
it’s presence in posts
without, I guess, me.
Bloody Inconceivable,
“by the numbers” lot.
@_@
@Lakakalo -
just blame mooncat blue
curse her roundly with kindness
then me, It’s my choice
for you see I,I?
I started poems to woo and just….
kept on writing them
interestingly
i’ve wooed many smiles back
never got any
I got an apple
muddled significances
rosy, green and tart
inconceivable
no twinkle in daddy’s eye
you’re here are you not?
a challenge for you
a.w.f. betternot look
I’ll sharea surprise.
bet you’ll see better
with proof’s beacon ‘fore your eyes
truths youjust suspect
Joke: Xanga’s front page
same shit squishin’ under foot
popularity.
I strove to get there
in front of all who enter
what does that make me?
thinking ’bout my name?
josh mean humor stop it! NOW
giggler! I’ll get you you
but seriously now
bet you think I’m popular
and you might not be.
heh heh heh heh heh
I’m shaking my head at that
you are mistaken
I’ve been heresome time
tried some tricks not road ponies
some work and some balk.
conversations made
many moments of shared smiles
read of Jericho
that black-bound bible
of it’s many stories told
resonance ripples
but back to real life
watch patterns as I do too
holding keystone truths
even palmist say
Josh, you’ve little Writer’s Fork
I’m still very me.
if one only knew
I was thinking and smiling
II’vesixteen hundred
letters to and frommy friend
maybe it is that
maybe it is that
I share best I know how to
and that’s the magic?
my shitty grammar
sucks so bad you’re left unsure
People GUESS i’m all that
interestin hun?
you’ve got to be joking me
maybe a little