February 24, 2012
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sky f*cking
cirrus fibratus
evap’rative whiperings
molestative touch
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evaporation becomes condesation
raining rivulettes releasing; ravagin
dried devastation – evaporation
sedation swirling toward salavation
encapsulation plodding progression
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Comments (9)
well done, Josh. clever!
@plantinthewindow - today I’mfiguratively getting mosquito bit for comment…annoyed I’m being eaten alive. this was 7 haiku using evaporation but I wanted just ashot to see ifit rolled outsde -:) (rolled outside of ahaiku form, since I likealso to forget to say halfthe sentences)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sMLYJU-D-_4&ob=av2e
Reminds me of Jimi Hendrix’s Excuse me while I kiss this guy.
excellent, I haven’t seen you do the concrete poems for a while, I always enjoyed them
@godfatherofgreenbay - here’s an oddity, I literally didn’t see that till you said it
@Roadkill_Spatula -
purple taterz – deep fat fried.
@xplorrn - how apposite
good job!
purple taters? I don’t think I’ve ever seen a purple potato. Where are they from?
@SamsPeeps - potatoes… peru… never seen? wow. message coming but thank you first
@starmanjones - No, I haven’t seen those. From Peru? We’ll have to ask Nelson if he tried any while he was there. Machu Pichuuuuuuuuu! (Uh, oh. I’m sayin’ it again! LOL)
Well, I guess I’ll have to find a market in Madison proper if I want any kind of special potato. There is only one market here in town and they don’t even carry malt vinegar (Yeah. They had never heard of it. I actually had to buy a bottle at Wal-Mart in the next town over… just so I could enjoy my Friday fish-n-chips).
I’ll look for your message now. xo