March 23, 2013
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agony row.
on agony row
what echo of hands clasped come apart?
snap shot ripples shown.
return innocence
churn up meadow flowers bright
a carefree semblance.
clever distraction
magics away joys and the dream
sorrow and ashes
how cruel is it now?
innocence’s color is ice
frozen moment’s snow.
so many have seen struggles this wee and month. I smile all I have which is that a smile of time. may you who have lost part of your smile not lose all of it and those of you worrying over yours keep looking for all they’ve down to lift yours as they ask for some of it back. For those of you dodging bullets be they iron or ironic seeming, yay you are a target smaller
Comments (10)
Love you dear friend you are the bomb
awesome sort of cheerful poem.
@SisterMae - just trying to be a bigger hug ma’am
@distractedbyzombies -
thank you mr bear.
The poem is filled with imagery. Well done … And thank you for the encouragement during my struggles. peace & smiles
@peacenow -
you have an email to enjoy powerpoints at least
sorry it’s full coolness is gone. but it’s still kinda fun.
Great images and emotions in this poem!
And YOU always bring a smile…er…perhaps a grin…ah…perchance a down-right-snort!!!
HUGS!!!
@adamswomanback -
hug.
It’s good to see you wax poetic.
I’ve been more an observer of problems than experiencing them directly, but they’re still very painful, especially the helplessness in not being able to solve them for people.
And I just wanted to say that “many have seen struggles this wee” sounds like a prostate problem or maybe kidney stones.
@Roadkill_Spatula - bahahahahaha
whoops